Aachoo Voo, Private Eye Episode Six The Impatient Patient and Grandfather Storklegs

Bear Burr as Dr. Bear Burr

Gary Farmer, Native American actor

as Dr, Bear Burr (Vince Edwards was out sick)

dreaming about curing Miss Voo in his

teddy bear bed.

Aachoo Voo, Private Eye

Episode Six

The Impatient Patient

and Grandfather Storklegs



I awoke at 6 a.m. to the sound of rain. It was a funny kind

of rain that sounded like laughter. And it was wet. Most

rain is, I realize that, but this rain was falling inside. On me.

And I didn’t like it. I rubbed my sleep laden eyes and pulled

myself up in bed. Where was I? Oh, right, the hospital. Of 

course! (Didn’t I usually wake up in the hospital?) I blinked

and pushed my long hair out of my face. I looked up. There 

was some kind of a round cobwebby looking contraption 

hanging over my bed. There appeared to be a big bug caught

in the middle of it. I frowned, thinking I must still be asleep.

“Good morning, Miss Voo, how are you today?”

I looked over to my right and saw Dr. Burr standing there in

the faint morning light holding a bowl of water and a feather.

He dipped the feather into the bowl and shook it across my

face. I jerked back and pulled the covers up to shield myself.

“Hey!” I complained, “What gives!?” He smiled and said, 

“Well, I thought I’d give you the Rain Dance effect without the

 actual Rain Dance. You know, cheer you up? Or wake you up.

You’ve been talking in your sleep for about an hour. Some 

mighty interesting stuff too, I might add.  What’s a Bilbo?” he

ended with a whisper.

“It’s a… I’m sorry, but it’s none of your business!” I snapped 

and straightened myself in the bed, pulled my knees up to my 

chin and shook back my hair. “What did I say, anyway? Did I 

mention coal or dragons or a man named david?” “No, I don’t 

think so,” he replied, pulling a stethoscope out of his pocket. 

"But there’s no call to get indignant. I’m indigenous and I don’t

get indignant. It gives you diverticulitis.” Then he smiled, 

“Most of the words were not familiar to me. You were speaking 

in some kind of foreign language for the most part. But I 

remember you kept saying something about “The Eye, the

Eye!” What was that all about?” I shrugged. “Just a 

nightmare, I suppose. Do I have a concussion?” He bent to 

check my heart beat and remained silent for quite a while. 

“What is it, doctor!?” I said, alarmed. I reached out to grab 

his wrist and accidentally pulled the end off his stethoscope.

It fell on the sheet between us and we both looked at it and 

sighed.

The doctor cleared his throat and swung the ponytail back 

over his shoulder. “Uh, actually, Miss Voo, that’s the thing.

When I came back on duty this morning and did my rounds,

I heard you talking and moving very restlessly in your sleep,

so I put one of my little dreamcatchers over your bed and you

quieted down considerably. It’s an Indian thing, I know, but it

sometimes works on you Pilgrims.” And he grinned and

blushed and looked down at the floor. ”I appreciate your 

concern, Dr. Burr,” I said, “But I’m sure that modern

medicine…”

But he shook his head and said a few words in his native

tongue. “Not in this case, miss. Grandfather Storklegs told

me that you needed strong medicine to pull you through this

one. So I listened to the wind and consulted the rain and put

my ear to the floor to determine….”

“Grandfather Whatlegs !?” I interrupted impatiently. “What 

are you talking about? Am I going to be alright? What about

my head w..w…wound?” And I put my hand to my head and

felt around frantically trying to find the goose egg I’d gone 

to sleep with. Apparently, it had hatched and flown the coop.

I was incredulous! “But h.h.how…?” I asked, puzzled, and 

the doctor smiled at me and threw another feather full of rain

on me. “Strong medicine.” he said very solemnly, tapping the 

side of his head “Grandfather knows.”

After checking me out further and finding nothing more 

unusual than a bruise or burn or scrape or stab wound, (so

far I had never been shot or dynamited but had come close

on several occasions) the good and wise Cherokee Medicine

Man told me I could expect to be checked out of the hospital 

shortly but to take my time and to lie there and reflect on my 

good fortune and miraculous healing. (For which he totally 

took credit.)

I didn’t know what to think. It was a miracle, I supposed and 

yet…something in the back of my mind kept hearing, “You’ll 

be well in the morning.” Who had said that? Had I dreamt it? 

The satchel! Where was it? I looked around the bed and the 

perimeter of the room. It was nowhere in sight. Had it ever 

even been there? I stretched out in bed, yawned, sighed 

and wondered what it might be like to live a normal life. I 

kicked my leg out to one side and connected with some kind 

of lump in the bed. It was soft. And hard. “Soft and hard??” I 

thought crazily and sat up and threw the covers back. There,

lying on the white sheet was a little purple velvet bag with it's

drawstrings pulled tight.

I picked it up and felt the weight of it in my hand. A distant 

memory ran through my mind like a flash and disappeared.

I pulled open the bag and poured about three dozen shiny 

gold coins into my lap. They were beautiful and cold and 

real. I put one to my teeth and bit it. Yep, they were real, 

alright. Solid gold coins. From what country, I had no idea,

but who cared about that? I was looking at a small fortune.

“Mr. Arehte!”' I said softly and snuggled down against the

pillows in total amazement. “I didn’t dream you up after all.”

And I laid there happily thinking of all the wonderful things

I could buy for my pets and my friends and all the new high

heels and paint thinner and sand paper and…..And that, of 

course, made me think of the late Mr. Si and his mysterious 

demise and of the terrible tall man in black with his awful red

eyes and his horrible plans to take over the world, or at the 

very least, his grandfather’s coal mines. But then I wondered

if that had been real and not a result of my now non existent 

head knot. It was all so confusing. I decided to go back to 

sleep for a while. This was too much for my Voo brain to deal 

with. I put the coins back in the bag and hid it in my own 

purse with it’s additional fortune of five thousand dollars. 

Along with the exquisite piece of jewelry from my small and 

generous client in that little bowler hat and hideous sandals.

“Darling,” I said to myself sleepily, “Tomorrow, we are going

to go shopping for a new convertible! And lots of insurance!”

And just as I was about to drift off to dreamland, I looked up 

at the ceiling and saw a movement in the dream catcher above

my head. “Help me!” a tiny terrified voice called and I imagined

that I saw a miniature figure in black with long hair and awful 

red eyes struggling there in the strings of the Indian art object.

I pulled the cord and turned off the lamp over my bed, threw 

the pillow over my head and shut out the light that peeked in 

through the blinds. “You’re not real,"  I muttered, “You’re only 

a dream! A dream, dammit, do you hear me? You’re only a 

dream!" From somewhere down the hall or out of the air vents,

I didn't know which, there came the lovely and soothing sound

of flute music and it calmed me and took my imagination to 

lovelier scenes.

I fell into a deep and much deserved healing sleep and when I awoke,

I made up my mind that I would hunt down poor lovable Andy and 

take him a truckload of flowers, fix the dent in his Studebaker,

pay his hospital bills, and convince him to give me another chance. 

My luck had changed and I was determined that so was my life!

(Note to self:  Enroll in a Charm and Etiquette School (for grown-ups) 

and learn how to go on a date without killing somebody!!) (Also, investigate 

J.R.R.Tolkien and see if he actually exists.) (Ask MiMi Voo if hallucinations

run in our family on the Voo side, not the Paramore side, I already knew 

her opinion regarding the Paramore side) and lastly, get Dr. Burr’s phone 

number in case it didn’t work out with Andy or worse, they had not been 

able to remove my high heel from his head and he had succumbed to…..

well,  a bad case of…..me.)

Grandfather StorkLegs

TO BE CONTINUED……….in episode 7

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Episode 7 link here

special thanks for the use of the names:

Paramore, Si, J R R Tolkien, Burr, Andy,
Gary Farmer, Vince Edwards